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Thanx Alliyah for reviewing this work. So I actually wrote the poem keeping in mind the kind of relaxation the night provides. If you've gone through some really tiring and ...

Thanx for your review. In the last line, I am talking about the scary silence that I had to face when the fairy flew away. :)

Thanx for your review! :)

Thanx for your review. Atropine is a drug to increase heartbeat and the italicised lines say the thoughts that come in the narrator's mind (The rest whole is a narration). ...

Thanx, I'm kind of living in that sort of atmosphere! XD

Wow sir, I just had some points that I could not really agree with you. You deleted your social media because of information overload. You were not able to cope ...

Wow, I enjoyed reading the review more than this poem. Thanx for diving so deep into it. 1. I actually planned the rhyming scheme as a-b-a-b-c-d-d but it went wrong ...

Hello @WanderlustStardust Really a wonderful piece of work. Thumbs up for how you connected each part of the story, in a chronological order, and still diving into the flashbacks at ...

Thanx for ur review, I am a bit confused at a few places, like the use of three adjectives while describing the teeth. Also, Under the shadows of light, I ...

Thanx for ur review, I mentioned things about the teeth to show that particular age group when milk teeth are replaced with the permanent ones because as u see, the ...

Thanx :D

Did u really read it? And I'm gonna edit this after reading some teen fiction. Suggest me, if you have any in mind.

Interesting! Aa gaye hum kaha :D

@Elinor and @Boluk, guys will u reply?

Hi, @Elinor and @Boluk I have edited this story a bit. I know I'm not that good, as of now. I also wanted to show something to the two of ...