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Thanks Elinor for your review. It shows where I lagged. Also, it would be helpful if you could suggest me any work of any author that can improve me at ...

Thanks for your review. I'll consider your points in my next work.

Thanks @GreyMatter for you review. I appreciate how you found a very simple dimension to my story and that shows where I lack in storytelling.I will consider your points in ...

Hello @maishaywca, thanks for your review. Some of your questions will be answered in the upcoming parts. Glad that you noticed things. Also, your review added some more points that ...

Hello @maishaywca, thanks for your review. Some of your questions will be answered in the upcoming parts. Glad that you noticed things. Also, your review added some more points that ...

Hello @maishaywca, thanks for your review. Some of your questions will be answered in the upcoming parts. Glad that you noticed things. Also, your review added some more points that ...

Hello @maishaywca, thanks for your review. Some of your questions will be answered in the upcoming parts. Glad that you noticed things. Also, your review added some more points that ...

Hello @maishaywca, thanks for your review. Some of your questions will be answered in the upcoming parts. Glad that you noticed things. Also, your review added some more points that ...

Hello @maishaywca, thanks for your review. Some of your questions will be answered in the upcoming parts. Glad that you noticed things. Also, your review added some more points that ...

Hello @maishaywca, thanks for your review. Some of your questions will be answered in the upcoming parts. Glad that you noticed things. Also, your review added some more points that ...

Hello @maishaywca, thanks for your review. Some of your questions will be answered in the upcoming parts. Glad that you noticed things. Also, your review added some more points that ...

Hello @maishaywca, thanks for your review. Some of your questions will be answered in the upcoming parts. Glad that you noticed things. Also, your review added some more points that ...

Hello @maishaywca, thanks for your review. Some of your questions will be answered in the upcoming parts. Glad that you noticed things. Also, your review added some more points that ...

Thanks @123pinkrose for your review. Some of the errors you pointed out were typos( but this won't happen the next time) while rest all would be noticed. Also, I won't ...

Thanks a lot for your review @Manilla. I appreciate how you went through my work. I will consider what you pointed out and make sure that appears in the upcoming ...