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Hi anitajaned! Here with a review :) The beginning was pretty confusing to me. I was a little lost on the information you were giving, since none of it was ...

Hey ChieRynn! This had me so confused for a few moments! But all in all it was super entertaining to stare at it, drag the image around, and almost be ...

Hi splatman73! Here I am with a review for this fantastic story! The first thing I would say is I'm a little confused with the opening. I was confused about ...

Hi, SilloriaD! Big fan of this story, happy to have more :) "And then, there was silence so pure that the sparks of embers were heard by all." I was ...

Oooh, I really enjoyed the imagery in this. The descriptive scenes gave me a chill that was similar to a narrator's. I like how when the boy came over to ...

I really enjoyed this, especially how you got into the characterization of Fillmore. I found him to be pretty comical as the small car wash owner who blames customers, who ...

Hey, GhostWriterSociety! This is one of my first review/critique so if it's too harsh or anything, I apologize in advance! Overall, you really captured my attention with this story! I ...