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I had my coffee in my hand, I was just sitting there, looking to see what was pushing the door to reach inside. I was waiting for it; I knew ...

After several weeks of continuous training, The remaining members of training group B Were dispersed among the companies of the 768th. Jonanthan Was assigned to Fox Company's 1st Platoon As ...

IS it sad that the beginning kinda tripped me up a little and made me think I was actually reading something about a real person? Hahaha! Of course not! That’s ...

Hunted The blue sky was pale and clear, streaked with red from the coming dawn (I think you should reword this sentence a little… Mostly because you say, the sky ...

Ok, so I’m here to review for you! Before I get started I want you to know that I might not be able to keep from tearing this apart. It’s ...

Hello!! : D So first of all, I didn't really see too much that I didn't necessarily needed to nit-pick or anything. I liked this piece alot, very...haunting... For some ...

Wow... I'm late... Hi, Jenth. Sorry I took so long to get here.    So I like really like this alot, I've never actually seen Fantasia, but I don't think that ...

Sorry I took so friggin' long to get this done! So, first of all, I love this and secondly, I agree with you, it does need to be a novel.  ...

Hello. I'm here to review :) So before I begin let me just say this piece was pretty interesting. You have a great style and it's also easy to follow, ...

Hello! I've been planning to do this for some time now, I just never could find the time to actually sit down and read :) but now I have, and ...

I don't have a critique. I just had to say that this is EXACTLY what I'm experiencing as I type! :;( I love the way you wrote it, too, by ...

Okay, what you have here is a good foundation to a potentially epic story. I only have a few things to say and I hope they help. It needs to ...

I need to read the first one now :) I couldn't really find anything wrong that everyone before hadn't already pointed out except for maybe one or two things. You ...

I have to say this made me smile. You seem very adventurous and carefree after reading this. I agree with you on the places you want to travel those are ...

Hello!! XD I'm Belle and I'll be reviewing you today :) There wasn't too much here that I had issues with. I just want to point out a few things. ...