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Well thank you!!! ha. :P

Hey thanks June, and don't worry you weren't harsh. I needed critisim. Ha. I see your point too. Thanks again! I will try harder next time. :)

Tears in their eyes Quiet sobs are heard As watery eyes look towards A wooden box. The box holds a body That used to be The soul no longer inside ...

well this is a cool song. ima put a song on here soon hope you check it out.......and your song is like those emotional songs and those songs always turn ...

Hey .... I like your poem. I have no criticism(honestly I don't know how to give it:P) But yeah. ha. I think its really good.

thanx... for the tips. i think i am getting the hang of this site...ha. :P

hey i dont have any criticsm only because im still being criticized. ha. i like the poem. and yaah hopefully people wont be so stupid.

well hi everyone.... honestly i am surprised that some many people like to write songs. then again i live in a small town. well im new. just wanted to start ...

omg this is sooo hilarious. but i have to say for the longest time it was nick jonas for mee. ha. although last year i gave up cause i know ...

well hello there. im a new person. i found this site by google. ha. i usually write poems....then some short stories....and songs. ha. well yaah. hi every one. :D

Feet walking in the sand left tracks of just one man; Blood and sweat was found with each step Leaving promises to those undeserving. Through the days he was beat ...