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Raises the question; if Britain collapsed into the sea tomorrow, and I hitched a boat ride to France, would I still be an Brit?

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I like the imagery. My question is, what does it gain from the line breaks? You're an expert poet (so I won't insult you with my normal level of critique ...

8/10 seems mundane and yet... strikes a chord.

Fictional doesn't mean it should be un-realistic. If it would never happen in real life, it probably shouldn't be in a real life type story. meloncholenly This isn't a word. ...

I looked at this... and I felt a moment of kinship. I think I'll kill myself, after writing a suicide note in poetry form, lamenting my short and talentless life, ...

Interesting, good to see people going for the writing challenge. My main problem with this is the choppy style; pretty much all of your sentances are short and end with ...

9/10 Legendary.

UK, UK, UK! OK, not quite the same ring, but we have GMT! Woot! On another note, I see your pesky US scientists are trying to change GMT so that ...

So, I'm thinking interesting, but a little disjointed. Let's get the poem out of the way first: You've got a little bit of a dodgy rhythm going on there, I ...

What else is 'ourselves' but the eventual outcome? We change as people due to exterior pressures; a person locked in a dark room since birth will not be the same ...

I don't know how many of you are Christian, and how many aren't, but it doesn't really matter; all this poem requires is a little sympathy for the mindset of ...

And we believe Lenin is right because...?

No! No! I have to comment again! :D I'm not usually one for knocking other people's critique... but the whole reeling off a list thing was what sold that part ...

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