baron.vrinda

Okay,this is surely a very cool story. You started off well, the content was excellent, but the ending was a little too quick. One moment Goode is smiling and the ...

Hi Your story is becoming more and more interesting day by day. I loved this chapter! I have just one question: In the last chapter you had mentioned that Sabrina’s ...

Hi! Even I have grown up with this slogan- 'UNITY IN DIVERSITY'. And what you've written is very true. It is so wrong to discriminate people on the basis of ...

The bell rang, finally. Recess. The teacher started writing the homework on the board and then taking her belongings, shuffled out of the class. “Geography isn’t that tough you know. ...

I now feel that the story is picking up. It a very, very interesting. The only thing i found odd was the modern lifestyle of Sabrina in the medieval times ...

I liked your poem. It was really good.But I lost the track of the poem a bit and it became a little confusing for me. I have a question. Why ...

I liked your story very much. Here are a few things i found a bit awkward:- 1) Don't you think John's house was a little too modern for the medieval ...

Our school’s annual function practice had begun. But I wasn’t participating. Studious children like me do not participate in annual functions and Sports Days because it makes us miss a ...

I liked your story. It was pretty gripping. But it had some minor faults here and there which can be corrected. I felt that the accident part and the story ...

Good to know you liked my poem. Yes, i know that the photographer who had clicked that pic later committed suicide. very sad... 'Sulekha' is a sit just like young ...

Your poem is very cool! instead of giving your poem the title " my first post", why don't you change it to "Wind" instead? before starting the poem, you can ...

I loved your poem! Its fabulous! at first, i found it a bit absurd, but when i read it again, i understood it perfectly. A few things that i felt ...

You never loved me. Whisper it in my ear. I’m waiting. Tell me the secret I’ve been dying to hear. I loved your starting! Don't you remove the line "You ...

Thanks for helping me improve my story. I am new at writing, and, as mentioned above, this was my first romantic fiction. maybe it would have been better if i ...

hi! I liked your is almost as good as your other writing! the only hitch i found in the poem was that, maybe, it went off the track a bit. ...