baron.vrinda

your poem is so coool! i found that there was one thing which could be edited:- Instead of What you say is wrong And it don’t matter at all. you ...

I found your poem really cooool!!! there was a flaw i found in your poem... The color of the sign that you see just a second to late Shouldn't it ...

This is the first romantic fiction i have written. Hope my readers enjoy it... :D ----------------------------------------------------------- Angad was a young, 25 year old marine engineer. He had jus

Hi! I liked your story! But i also felt it could be much, much improved... The girl was drunk. She said that she wasn't noticing the details. But then how ...

I found your poem very neat. it was flawless! The heart is like a puzzle, Always scattered about The heart is like a land In a constant drought The heart ...

your poem was so cool! i know i am reading it many days after it was actually posted, but i really wanted to review it. I see her on the ...

It was a chilly, quiet evening in the highway to Ramgarh, a Rajasthani village. Evenings and nights in this highway are usually infinity of blackness containing a blanket of thick ...

Hey, nice story!:-) it was really impressive. i really liked it! The moon shone against the tombstones, making the contrast even greater, and the tombs look even more black and ...

My poetry is not that good, i am working on it right now... Sometimes i get across some trivial incidents of everyday which inspire me to write. or sometimes, whenever ...

Hi! your poem is so cool! though it became pretty ruffled at times. I felt that you used too many ellipsis, which pushed the poem off the track. and if ...

Fantastic! A lovely poem you've written! i could only find two flaws in the poem... Killed by a monster His name was Kevin . i had to read this line ...

Dear bro, thanks for your reply. i had written this poem almost two years back. as for the rest, i'll edit it.

Gone with the Wind and Robin Hood

it was a nice story, though i didn't get it much... you should make it more clear. so Mary was the dog, right? and Tim was her owner? why does ...

your poem, or supposedly a poem, is so nice! it is not necessary that every good poem should be long. though you really need to work on your rhyme and ...