baron.vrinda

I wrote this poem 2 years back. It is one of the best poems I had written then. I was 11 when I wrote it… ----------------------------- I see a businessman, ...

This is a poem I had written almost two years back when I was about 12 on world water day. Hope you like it… ===================== I woke up afresh, kissed ...

Hey, it is nice poem you've written. i liked it. your poem is simple, concise, to the point, yet very captivating. We weren't always like this, Pulled apart, Broken. We ...

I loved your poem! you can’t keep cutting away at life. You’ve got to build it. i liked these lines the best because if it wouldn't have been for these ...

hey, finally you expanded it! sounds much better now! i am excited to know who lucas will take to the cinema...

i really liked your story,but i feel it lacked emotions... how did emily and her family catch fire so easily? and why was everyone talking when they had caught fire? ...

thats easy, i survive..on hope this was my favorite line in your story. But why does the old woman call it easy? Instead, shouldn't you write "i survive... on hope". ...

i loved your poem! it was fabulous! it doesn't seem that this is your first poem. you seem to be adept at poetry! One thing’s for sure: I died here ...

hey, it was a nice prologue... But i feel that if you expand the story and start writing its chapters, it will become much better... only able to be filled ...

i felt that the title of the story didn't fit in. and i really can't make out much from the story. it seems a little lost from its track... but ...

Hey, i feel Twilight and Eragon were really cool books. maybe they didn't suit you. Eragon, in some parts, really was based on Lord of the Rings. but the author ...

Your story was fantastic! i really liked it... you should seriously expand it. :D my life is a white canvas waiting to be filled with colors this is one of ...

gosh~ it was incredible! it is a superb poem you've written! i don't think it can be any better than what it is.

nice one! though i feel it could have been a little better...

thanks peanut for helping me correct my story. English isn't my native language and so i tend to make a lot of mistakes! and please call me vrinda instead of ...