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baron.vrinda

  • Narrative Poetry Re: His Kisses

    this is one of the best poems i have read here! i loved it! my favorite was the first para. do write more!

    Sep 26, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Me and You

    this poem was lovely! but it got a little confusing. was she refusing to his proposal? 'cause he was from a different place? did she want him to first get ...

    Sep 26, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Big Mistake

    this story was really scary! i loved it! it was really engrossing. a classic piece!

    Sep 26, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Twilight : The real story

    hey, this was fantastic! i loved it! i am a fan of twilight too. your story is one of a kind! i think you forgot to change Forks High School ...

    Sep 26, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Bella's 30th Birthday

    hey, your version of the story was cool!

    Sep 26, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Better Mother

    this is the first story i have written of this kind. please reply if you liked it or found that it could be improved. :) =================================================================== We work for

    Sep 26, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Running free.

    i loved your story! why don't you expand it? you really are a fabulous writer! :D

    Sep 26, 2009
  • Lyric Poetry Re: This World

    this poem was great! you have a very talented poet in you. you should really write more poems... i loved your poem. it was so filled with emotions and feelings...

    Sep 26, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Love Sucks (Edited+Expanded)

    hey, good that you ended it properly. it seems better... i liked this new edition :) are you going to add more to this story? i felt that the girl ...

    Sep 26, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: The Dream Snatcher

    this story was so coooooooool!!! I really loved it.... i had written a story like this two years back... the monster under my bed had come out to be my ...

    Sep 26, 2009
  • Homework Help Re: Thesis Statement

    i really like your thesis.. i agree with you. :smt001

    Sep 25, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Deleted

    i really liked your story! it was really cool and nicely depicted the sort of thing one feels when in that situation. do write more! :D

    Sep 25, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Understanding

    the poem is really beautiful! i really like it... :D

    Sep 22, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Path of Hurdles

    i am new at writing, the new kid on the block :D this is one of my best poems..... even a huge boulder had to face the harsh ragging of ...

    Sep 22, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Rumour

    fantastic aqua! i really don't think it could have been better.... i really liked the last verse... lovely!

    Sep 22, 2009


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— Antoine de Saint-ExupĂ©ry, The Little Prince