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Re: His Kisses
this is one of the best poems i have read here! i loved it! my favorite was the first para. do write more!
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Me and You
this poem was lovely! but it got a little confusing. was she refusing to his proposal? 'cause he was from a different place? did she want him to first get ...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: The Big Mistake
this story was really scary! i loved it! it was really engrossing. a classic piece!
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Twilight : The real story
hey, this was fantastic! i loved it! i am a fan of twilight too. your story is one of a kind! i think you forgot to change Forks High School ...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Bella's 30th Birthday
hey, your version of the story was cool!
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: A Better Mother
this is the first story i have written of this kind. please reply if you liked it or found that it could be improved. :) =================================================================== We work for
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Running free.
i loved your story! why don't you expand it? you really are a fabulous writer! :D
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: This World
this poem was great! you have a very talented poet in you. you should really write more poems... i loved your poem. it was so filled with emotions and feelings...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Love Sucks (Edited+Expanded)
hey, good that you ended it properly. it seems better... i liked this new edition :) are you going to add more to this story? i felt that the girl ...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: The Dream Snatcher
this story was so coooooooool!!! I really loved it.... i had written a story like this two years back... the monster under my bed had come out to be my ...
Sep 26, 2009 -
Re: Thesis Statement
i really like your thesis.. i agree with you. :smt001
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Deleted
i really liked your story! it was really cool and nicely depicted the sort of thing one feels when in that situation. do write more! :D
Sep 25, 2009 -
Re: Understanding
the poem is really beautiful! i really like it... :D
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: The Path of Hurdles
i am new at writing, the new kid on the block :D this is one of my best poems..... even a huge boulder had to face the harsh ragging of ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: The Rumour
fantastic aqua! i really don't think it could have been better.... i really liked the last verse... lovely!
Sep 22, 2009
