baron.vrinda

I liked your story very much. Here are a few things i found a bit awkward:- 1) Don't you think John's house was a little too modern for the medieval ...

I liked your story. It was pretty gripping. But it had some minor faults here and there which can be corrected. I felt that the accident part and the story ...

Your poem is very cool! instead of giving your poem the title " my first post", why don't you change it to "Wind" instead? before starting the poem, you can ...

I loved your poem! Its fabulous! at first, i found it a bit absurd, but when i read it again, i understood it perfectly. A few things that i felt ...

You never loved me. Whisper it in my ear. I’m waiting. Tell me the secret I’ve been dying to hear. I loved your starting! Don't you remove the line "You ...

hi! I liked your is almost as good as your other writing! the only hitch i found in the poem was that, maybe, it went off the track a bit. ...

your poem is so coool! i found that there was one thing which could be edited:- Instead of What you say is wrong And it don’t matter at all. you ...

I found your poem really cooool!!! there was a flaw i found in your poem... The color of the sign that you see just a second to late Shouldn't it ...

Hi! I liked your story! But i also felt it could be much, much improved... The girl was drunk. She said that she wasn't noticing the details. But then how ...

I found your poem very neat. it was flawless! The heart is like a puzzle, Always scattered about The heart is like a land In a constant drought The heart ...

your poem was so cool! i know i am reading it many days after it was actually posted, but i really wanted to review it. I see her on the ...

Hey, nice story!:-) it was really impressive. i really liked it! The moon shone against the tombstones, making the contrast even greater, and the tombs look even more black and ...

Hi! your poem is so cool! though it became pretty ruffled at times. I felt that you used too many ellipsis, which pushed the poem off the track. and if ...

Fantastic! A lovely poem you've written! i could only find two flaws in the poem... Killed by a monster His name was Kevin . i had to read this line ...

it was a nice story, though i didn't get it much... you should make it more clear. so Mary was the dog, right? and Tim was her owner? why does ...