baron.vrinda

Hey, it is nice poem you've written. i liked it. your poem is simple, concise, to the point, yet very captivating. We weren't always like this, Pulled apart, Broken. We ...

I loved your poem! you can’t keep cutting away at life. You’ve got to build it. i liked these lines the best because if it wouldn't have been for these ...

i really liked your story,but i feel it lacked emotions... how did emily and her family catch fire so easily? and why was everyone talking when they had caught fire? ...

thats easy, i survive..on hope this was my favorite line in your story. But why does the old woman call it easy? Instead, shouldn't you write "i survive... on hope". ...

i loved your poem! it was fabulous! it doesn't seem that this is your first poem. you seem to be adept at poetry! One thing’s for sure: I died here ...

Your story was fantastic! i really liked it... you should seriously expand it. :D my life is a white canvas waiting to be filled with colors this is one of ...

hey, good that you ended it properly. it seems better... i liked this new edition :) are you going to add more to this story? i felt that the girl ...

this story was so coooooooool!!! I really loved it.... i had written a story like this two years back... the monster under my bed had come out to be my ...