baron.vrinda

gosh! this is a fantastic one! you've conveyed an essentially undeniable fact through such simple words! just love it! :)

please read the story properly. who'll come to know who is a boy and who is a girl !!!

Please don't mind,but i didn't get much from your writing. But, its beautifully described and the scenario you've created is magnificent.

AGNI IS A GIRL!!!!!

Good to know you liked my poem. Yes, i know that the photographer who had clicked that pic later committed suicide. very sad... 'Sulekha' is a sit just like young ...

Thanks for helping me improve my story. I am new at writing, and, as mentioned above, this was my first romantic fiction. maybe it would have been better if i ...

Dear bro, thanks for your reply. i had written this poem almost two years back. as for the rest, i'll edit it.

hey, finally you expanded it! sounds much better now! i am excited to know who lucas will take to the cinema...

hey, it was a nice prologue... But i feel that if you expand the story and start writing its chapters, it will become much better... only able to be filled ...

i felt that the title of the story didn't fit in. and i really can't make out much from the story. it seems a little lost from its track... but ...

gosh~ it was incredible! it is a superb poem you've written! i don't think it can be any better than what it is.

nice one! though i feel it could have been a little better...

thanks peanut for helping me correct my story. English isn't my native language and so i tend to make a lot of mistakes! and please call me vrinda instead of ...

this is one of the best poems i have read here! i loved it! my favorite was the first para. do write more!

this poem was lovely! but it got a little confusing. was she refusing to his proposal? 'cause he was from a different place? did she want him to first get ...