baron.vrinda

this story was really scary! i loved it! it was really engrossing. a classic piece!

hey, this was fantastic! i loved it! i am a fan of twilight too. your story is one of a kind! i think you forgot to change Forks High School ...

hey, your version of the story was cool!

i loved your story! why don't you expand it? you really are a fabulous writer! :D

this poem was great! you have a very talented poet in you. you should really write more poems... i loved your poem. it was so filled with emotions and feelings...

i really liked your story! it was really cool and nicely depicted the sort of thing one feels when in that situation. do write more! :D

the poem is really beautiful! i really like it... :D

fantastic aqua! i really don't think it could have been better.... i really liked the last verse... lovely!

the story is neatly written..... very nice!