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beachchick88

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Pain Come Softly

    You have a good sense of imagery... i especially liked: your whims with pulsing, light concern, and sing to Peace’s throaty, husky bay that thunder comes at daylight’s black return ...

    Mar 27, 2006


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge