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  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Mother.

    Hello Lauren. First of all i want to say Thank you for the review,I really appreciate it. For your first question about the death of her mother and the father ...

    Mar 20, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For my one and only.

    Thank you for your review,Captainearth. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. x

    Feb 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For my one and only.

    Hello dogs, I fixed the errors you pointed,and i really appreciate it. I'm glad you loved this piece,Thank you for you review. x

    Feb 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: For my one and only.

    First of all thank you for your review. i believe that the poem was not very clear for you,or maybe just wasn't clear. The kind of love i was talking ...

    Feb 2, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Coin

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    Feb 1, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams thief

    Thank you so much for your review. I edited the 'h' in hearts,thank you for pointing that out. For the ending,you are definitely right,I turned the lights off to shut ...

    Jan 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams thief

    Thank you for your review. For me the idea of taking someone else's dream is to be who they want to be,to do what they want to do,to turn it ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams thief

    Hello,Madison. Thank you so much for your review,I edited my work and I hope that I corrected what you pointed out,I really appreciate that and need it. Please show me ...

    Jan 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Dreams thief

    First of all,I want to thank you for your review I really appreciate it. Also,thank you for your advice,i really do have a problem with grammar and I always try ...

    Jan 26, 2017


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