beautyandthefish

You comb her hair, You gently stroke her arm, Were you really that innocent? Did you really care so much? That it wouldn't even matter, If she told you that ...

It's a good start, but does read like a summary, and doesn't feel like a story to me. Try adding in some more details.

Hey, I'm Sarah, and new here. I'm a big romance fan, and I write just about anything I think, I look forward to meeting you all!