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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: lost between the cracks

    I love the imagery you’ve used here! And the style in which you wrote the verses. All in all, I am impressed. A very well written poem! :D :D :D

    Aug 14, 2007
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Folded Page of a Dream

    Folded page of a dream in my pocket Maybe it’s just me but I think you should add an “a” to the beginning of that sentence. Ignore me if you ...

    Aug 14, 2007


while she was studying the ways of pasta he was studying the ways of the sword
— soundofmind