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berrie

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: you are no longer the sun

    Hi there! My name's Berrie, and I'll be reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Let's get started! :) Top Graham Cracker - Opening Thoughts: The narrator is speaking about ...

    Feb 6, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, Culture Re: the protector [i was not]

    Hello!! My name is Berrie! I wanted to stop by and leave a review on your poem. Initial thoughts: This piece was so raw and heartfelt. I understood the emotions ...

    Feb 5, 2024
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Blame

    Hi! I saw your poem, and wanted to stop by and review it. This one really hit. Short, but right to the point. I can feel the punchiness and contempt ...

    Jan 17, 2024
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: My Half-Filled Plastic Bottle

    I thought this poem was super clever. It did a great job combining complex and flowery language with a bit of a tongue-and-cheek concept overall - glorifying something like a ...

    Jan 13, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Fate Undone- Prolouge

    This is a really cool idea for a prologue. It feels purposefully vague, but you can still get a good idea of what the narrator's saying without getting lost or ...

    Jan 13, 2024


Every time I’ve gotten feedback that was hard to take it was usually hard to take because there was truth in it and I didn’t like that (or didn’t want to receive it). That’s not to say all harsh feedback is good or that we should be harsh for harshness’ sake, but learning to absorb truth without letting it break your inner core/break you is a lifelong skill that keeps your mind elastic and open to learning.
— soundofmind