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  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dear Jess. From, That Girl You Probably Don't Remember.

    Hello, I really enjoyed reading this. Before I get to anything, there was only one thing that really bugged me and it was this line: "It has been nearly a ...

    Sep 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: 24 Hours -- A Thriller pt 2

    And by married Josue, I meant divorced Josue* haha. She got the house and custody of her daughters in the divorce.

    Sep 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: 24 Hours -- A Thriller pt 2

    Thank you for reading part two! Just to clarify, I mentioned in the last part that Ruby had married Josue and had kept sole custody of her two daughers, Rosalia ...

    Sep 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: 24 Hours -- A Thriller

    I 100% completely agree with you on info dumping on a reader. I won't lie--I got too lazy to figure out how to get this point across without doing this. ...

    Sep 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: 24 Hours -- A Thriller

    Haha, thank you for catching those! That's why I always need a fresh pair of eyes to review my work. Thank you so much.

    Sep 29, 2016


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