blackmillpoet

I think your first two opening lines set the mood really well, but then I thought you let yourself down a bit. I thought you should have continued addressing the ...

My interpretation at least was that someone had just been murdered in front of you and you were talking rather eerily in the 3rd person. Just in that moment I ...

Personally I thought you could have used a journey to transition from the 1st to the 2nd stanza, great you've found the key .. now how do you feel? You ...