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Re: Part One Edited
Hey! I'm not a really great reviewer but I'll try. NIce to meet youu~~ Ok. So is this the very beginning of a story? The concept is interesting, I'm not ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: Guns of Icarus!
Interesting. I feel like this should be more of a prologue as opposed to a first chapter. Personally I feel like you're just putting a bunch of statements, a bunch ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Ostara
I like this :) I don't know much about pagan eligion, and I'm not sure about your intent on the length of this, but if you're open to requests, maybe ...
Aug 31, 2013