blacktiger3915

First of all, welcome to YWS! But what is this suppose to be? You should rethink this. Anyway, best wishes. :D

I liked the poem! Great job! :smt041 I would like to read more.

Sorry about if I was being harsh... but I was just saying how I felt.

Thank you shanan-cat. I said I loved you in the beginning and end like that to show that she loved him to death. And that she still loved him even ...

I have to totally agree with Angel of Death. I see potential. Anyway, best wishes and good luck! :wink:

This was good, but I wasn't laughing extremely hard, but it was amusing. Keep up the good work! :D

Nice. Very nicely written. I won't to read more pretty please! :D

I liked it. Keep up the good work. Post more please. :)

Terrible. I made my head hart. Please fix this or take it off the web cause I don't want anybody to read this anymore until it's fixed. Sorry I was ...

It was ok. Just ok. It was like a read this somewhere before. I don't know. I'm just talking outside of my neck. Keep writing. :wink:

Does anybody have a tissue? The last two stanzas made me cry even more! :smt022 Keep writing please!!!!!!!

Thanks girl! I'll surely stop by and read it! Talk to you later. :D

Thank you darkdove! I hope other people like it. :?

Whats up girl? I liked the poem (tear) :smt010. Great work. I miss my boyfriend!

I'm sorry, but I didn't like this poem. But I know in the long run, your stories and poems will be much better. Best wishes! :)