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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: You're Going to Die Someday

    Wow, this was a really interesting way to write about death. It was also informative as well as a poem. You're absolutely correct when people don't really think about death. ...

    Jul 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: One - But What If It's Just Anxiety?

    This is a very interesting piece. I really enjoy that you wrote about you own struggles, I feel as though not many people talk about anxiety. I think you're very ...

    Jul 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: U and I. U is my beloved love and I is the desperate me in love.

    This was very interesting to read. I think it shows how a relationship can be when people are second-guessing how the other feels. However, I think this piece could be ...

    Jul 6, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: It's hard, Harder it goes by time...

    I think this was beautifully written. I like how you styled your poem as well with the indentations. In a way, it makes it easier to read because the short ...

    Jul 6, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Becoming

    I really like how you wrote this. I feel as though each of us feels this way at some point in our life. However, like your ending, we find ourselves. ...

    Jul 6, 2020


I tell the neophyte: Write a million words–the absolute best you can write, then throw it all away and bravely turn your back on what you have written. At that point, you’re ready to begin.
— David Eddings