bludragon525

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vines (don't ask where that came from)

Hey!!!!! At first glance, your poem shape looked it was very random and had no point. And then, like Rachel, I realized that it was shiver. I was confused by ...

Hey! I liked it. I guess that's all I can really say. You had a few typos, but nothing too serious. those still frames .. I was a little confused ...

Hey Cassidy! Welcome to the wacky world of YWS!!!!!! Eccentric, huh? So am I. My friends all call me insane. :D So, we have a couple of basic rules here ...

Hey!!!! Great poem! I loved it from the very first line. I found nothing wrong with it; your grammar was good, except for a few "I"s here and there. Obsessed ...

Hey!!!! First off, I really liked your poem. This poem portrays several feelings, all of which links to one another in some way or another. I could relate to it ...

Hey! Darko basically said everything for me. When I kiss you, It doesn’t mean, I love you, It means: Never let me go, I care so much for you, I ...

Oh my gods. That had me laughing my head off. Great job!

Hey! When I was reading your first stanza, I had absolutely no idea where you were going with this. But then I read your second stanza, and I loved it. ...

Hey! Like both darko and Tayla, I didn't like your repeating part. It sounds..... insecure, and I would suggest taking it out. Men move hurriedly, racing the sun to the ...

Hey lala!!! Welcome to the wacky world of YWS!!!! I'm Zoe, or more commonly known as Dragon. YWS is a really fun website. I hope you get as addicted to ...

Hey Forever Always! Welcome to the wacky world of YWS!!!! I'm Zoe, but I'm more commonly known as Dragon. I discovered this website from one of my very close friends ...

You're welcome Tucker. If I don't point it out, who will? And for the millionth time, spell my name right!!!!!!!! zOe :smt043

Hey! Wow.... that's all I can really say. I felt myself reaching out to the narrator, it that rarely happens in poems. Great job! but where were you in my ...