bludragon525

Zenziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs and tackles* Welcome to YWS!!!!!!!!! And hiya Katheryn!

Heh. I just forced my two best friends to join and do it with me! Yay!

I just signed up, and boy, is it scary. I'm bludragon525 (duh) , if anyone wants to add me.

I'll come. :)

I call a demi-god spot!

Sorry for the wait! IT is finished now.

Hey Mo! Blu here, as promised! Your poem was really good! It created a great imagery that I could see inside my mind as I read, like a movie in ...

Hey! Blu here! W-o-w. That was really good. You gave the perfect amount of information to the upcoming story, but left us hanging all the same. In the tiniest corner ...

Review finished! Great job, empress! Any other volunteers?

Hey, empress! Sorry for the wait. Well, it looks like everyone's already nit-picked their way through, so I'll just move on. Your beginning was a little wordy. Which was odd, ...

Hey! Hm. It's a little too short for me to make anything of it. It does feel like we've heard it before in some book or newspaper article that we've ...

Awesome job, empress! Just, please stop abusing the semi-colon. Please. Keep it coming, people!

Blu here, as promised! Cool story! I would definitely buy it if it were published. :) Okay, I am going to say this as simply as I can. Stop abusing ...

Hey! I'm Blu! Works that need to be torn to shreds *coughcough* hrm, critiqued, post here! Please keep in mind that I try not to be too harsh, but (according ...

Hey! Blu here! Nice poem! But... I felt you could use some punctuation. Not all poems have it, but in your case, it would definitely help. but you'd come back ...