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  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Alone (Part 1)

    That description about stethoscope is peculiar. Since stethoscope isn't a living thing, labelling it as snake make it seem alive, while the real thing is static. The doctor stutters. Now, ...

    Jul 15, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Realistic Re: You never told me

    Hello. I can feel the regret through her description. This is a sad story, and you convey it well. I like how simple and short this is, but there's a ...

    Jun 27, 2017
  • Script » Humor, General Re: The Last Calculator

    Dang, why it need to be a dream? Anyway, hello. I'm bluecoral. First impression- I like this story. This is my first time reviewing a script, and the different presentation ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Grim Sleeper (Prologue)

    Hello, there. I'm Bluecoral. Now, before I start, I want to apologize if the quality of my review will not satisfy you. It had been a long time since I ...

    Jun 23, 2017


Love is friendship that has caught fire. It is quiet understanding, mutual confidence, sharing and forgiving. It is loyalty through good and bad times. It settles for less than perfection and makes allowances for human weaknesses.
— Ann Landers