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I agree, I read it in yr 7, horrendous. I also hate The Machine Gunners. And Before I Die is pretty awful. Shadowmancer. I got a page through that. Wohoooo!

She tells him that the sun is beautiful. It’s making the living room a patchy gold. She murmurs this, making sure that she’s louder than his snuffled breathing; and she ...

I like it. You have a really, really nice style :). I think you could concentrate on really getting accross the tragedy this guy is going through. For example, how ...

That was a really nice peice of writing. I loved the tone of the narrator, friendly and cheerful. If this was meant to be a depressing peice, I didn't feel ...

I really enjoyed reading that. I would have enjoyed a little more description of the surroundings, but that's just me. Your writing is beautiful. :)

Awwwwwwww, that is so sweet: Bella Cullen. Love it :)

The better half of a half smile Watching Her hand was just holding her head up. It had stopped its slide upwards at the cheekbone, and her skin was bulging ...

Three Kisses…xxx My boots are made of mud. I can’t see any leather, just mud; the mud that has become the boot. In fact it’s not just my boots: my ...