bookworm27

Thanks for your review! I do feel that I am way too superfluously pretentious in this essay-I'm not a big fan of the style, but my english teacher insists upon ...

Thanks so much Kafkaescence! I always love your reviews! I'll be sure to edit this--I normally don't just throw something down, but it came to me, and I said what ...

Hello! Booky here to review-comments are in bold! My hair whipped from side to side Oh dear. Been listening to a bit too much Willow Smith have we? as I ...

Wow! Unfortunately I'm on my itouch-dang tiny keyboard- so I can't do an in depth review, but I really enjoyed this! Can't wait to read the next part! -booky

Thanks so much for your input!

Thanks so much for everyones thoughts! I was not really sure whether this is a true comparison essay, as it also includes the overall theme of originality...also, as you all ...

Lovely poem! Very descriptive, concise...what's not to love?

I really really like this piece...only a few nitty gritty things, like Tara Taylors? Sorry, that just annoys me a bit. We have similar writing styles I believe, very descriptive ...

Lovely poem! I love the ending! My only suggestion is to throw in a few more descriptive adjectives or words to spice it up. Other than that, very sweet!

Lovely poem! I love the ending! My only suggestion is to throw in a few more descriptive adjectives or words to spice it up. Other than that, very sweet!

Hmmm...nice writing style, and has real potential, but i find the plot...or at least the beginning intro a bit cliche? older man, young girl, old house- i think it could ...

Just gave me the chills. I love the use of the word ecstatic! Humanity is such a bold topic, this poem manages to expose the venerability and the harshness of ...