borntobeawriter

Chapter Two (Lucas) If a child is born and raised in a home that is loving and nurturing, where there is complete truth about who we are, you can't give ...

Ok, I don't usually do this this way but because there has been so many replies, I can't see your chappy when I scroll. So, this way it is! Prologue ...

Katieee! haha, This was short and sweet and I much prefer her healing to last one's. You'll explain it further on, though, right? I can't wait to read more, for ...

ah ha! But what IF his father hadn't been murdered? Don't mind me, I was so caught up in this story that I had to add a comment. So, Jenny, ...

Hi Jenny, I'm presently reading your chapters and I find them very good. I'll get to the end of your chapters before replying but I wanted to mention something. You ...

Hey Kyllorac! The day the First One died was the day the First People were born. One hundred they were in number, springing fully-formed from the First One’s body; fifty ...

Hey there Rain, Tanya here for a review! :D How he would love to take his dusty and old, dark blade to his stomach, but that would have to wait. ...

Well, Rachael, I'm really glad you reposted it. I enjoyed reading it the second time as much as the first. Like I said before, I find your descriptions to flow ...

Well hiya there Bickazer, I can honestly say that I haven't read the first chapter but decided to review the second. First of all; wowee. Second of all`WOW!¸ Third: No ...

Hey there Tiger, It's probably easiest to say that this blew me away, but that's not quite accurate. This piece isn't the reach-out-and-grab-you-and-pull-you-in-mercilessly sort. This is sort, rather,

Ignis, last one! Aww, and I was on a roll! ;) Okay this was the last chapter for now, you've got no more for me! haha. There's something I'm wondering ...

Hahaha, love this chapter! God, the wit in here is incredible! I love your characters, Ignis! Argo is such a clutz! I'm reading your chapter and it reminds me of ...

Ignis, here again! Seriously, where is everyone? *looks around* Do you Pm your reviewers when you bring out a new chapter? Have you let them know there's more out? Because, ...

Huh, first one here? I'm honoured! :D Hi Ignis. Well, I liked this chapter. The brevity of it was welcomed and I liked the interaction between Argo and Morgan. I ...

Hi Ignis, Tanya, back again! Okay, well, I really don't have much to say here. Didn't find any mistakes. It was a long scene, but it needed to be done. ...