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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fyodor's Time

    Thanks ryanke07!

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Fyodor's Time

    Good point. Unfortunately, the contest has a word limit of 1000, and I haven't got a word to spare. I might be able to shift some stuff around in the ...

    Jun 23, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Oso Weeping

    My one tip would be try to incorporate more "showing" rather than "telling" in your narrative. I felt like too much information was given to me to easily.

    Jun 23, 2011


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