brandenwallace

I hate forums because nobody ever gives me any feedback on my writing :x

Sounds like you have a good plot and the detail is good... Keep up the good work.

Here's another part of my story. Slowly, things began to take form in front of Dathor’s face. He blinked his eyes and looked about once more. Things were still hard ...

i will add detail of the nighwraiths in a later section. thanks for the grammar tip.