brokeninpieces

That is so cool! I love it, pinks not my favorite color, but I still liked it. I like the way the black faded and how the pink inside was ...

Wow, I could NEVER do that in my computer! I can barely write my own name! Good job, dude!

It was really sweet, I liked it. I couldn't help but feel bad for the boy, deceit is never the answer, but I'd probably clap too. Nice words by the ...

I liked it, and very much agree the new piece is better than the old. It has a lot more details, really, very good, but I also agree with the ...

I really liked it and agree that you should write with your darker side more often. But of course, I love dark poetry, but you're very good at it and ...

I actually like the last four lines and the imagery was very good. I could feel the agony and despair, awesome! It does need a little work, but not much. ...

Is it really about a boulder? Well, either way, it's really good. XD

I really loved this poem, especially since I feel the same way, today in this world, people are so hyprocritical, but really, it was an awesome poem. This will definetly ...

This is really good, very deep. I really like it, this is something I wouldn't definetly rate a high score for. Good job, dude, (I call everyone dude, so please ...

I've been writing poetry for 7 years. I used to sing, but when I saw poetry for what it truly is, I decided I wanted to that. So I worked ...

I liked it a lot, but there's really no flow. If people have said this already sorry, I haven't read the comments yet. But the imagery is awesome, and your ...

I’ve finally gotten rid of you. You’re finally gone from my mind. At first, I didn’t know what I’d do without you. Now I don’t need you. I’m finally ready ...

It was meant to be a twist or Rome and Juliet, but thank you. What I was trying to say was the Juliet had found her Romeo dead, they had ...

Amazing, really truly amazing. You sound like you've been writing forever. You sound like a professional on this. I'm actually speechless, but really that was awesome, I loved it.

Good, but like I tell everyone else, use more figurative language. Give some more imagery and hyperboles. It is good though, just needs some work. When I started writing my ...