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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The end is near

    Really good, I could feel the anger and violence as if it was my own.

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: My Superman

    It wasn't bad, bittersweet. I couldn't but feel as if I were talking about MY Superman.

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Monster That Is Mine

    Good, really good, I got confused a little though...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Lost.

    I really like this, the emotion was easy to read, and I felt despair, as if I were you.

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Anger Splatters

    I love it, and I told you that you were good, this helps prove it.

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A reason, A season

    I agree with TheTruthLiesWithin.

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I'm So Full Of It

    I really liked this poem, the flow was good. Really good.

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Kiss me when I'm sober

    I absolutely love it, good job! Make some more, please.

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Ramblings of a dead heart.

    Good, but needs more figurative language, but still good without.

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Promise

    It's beautiful, and reminds me of when I was young and innocent.

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: invisible to you. :-(

    It's really good and sad, it reminded me of my ex boyfriend. I really liked it.

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: White Ravens

    That was awesome! I loved it. It was sad, and reminded me of the past. Maybe that's why it's so good, because it hit something inside of me too and ...

    Jan 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Darkness pops my Bubble

    That was really good. How long have you been writing? If your like me it'd be around 7 years, you should really publish them.

    Jan 25, 2011


I only know that learning to believe in the power of my own words has been the most freeing experience of my life. It has brought me the most light. And isn't that what a poem is? A lantern glowing in the dark.
— Elizabeth Acevedo, The Poet X