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Cheers Claudette :)

LMAO you guys are hilarious. Do you have the link to the thread in the Nano forums, anyone? Would love to read more.

I tried to post once already but my darn computer went ape and lost it >.< Will try to remember what I said, LOL. Today I met a lady with ...

I liked the rhythm of this one. One complaint, the last line doesnt seem long enough - I'd rewrite to "Listening to the echoes fade." Otherwise, a nice piece. :wink:

Poor supplicant begs at her master’s door for love; for she is tired and hungry, and one kind word will feed her for a month. Poor sorry girl, in bare ...

As usual, I dont really understand your work CL (which is generally why I just lurk instead of crit :oops: ) but I must say I enjoyed this one. An ...

It’s not cool to be popular anymore – ask anyone: if you’re pretty, you’re a bitch, if you wear make-up, you’re a slut, and don’t get me started on those ...

LMAO I found it hilarious. Gross overuse of exclamation marks, but otherwise amusing. Maybe I'm just weird. As a piece of poetry, of course, it has far to go, but ...

Am I the only one who becomes quite irate when I see a typo? I dont mean just the usual reversal or confusion of letters, but the mistake of a ...

Wow. I feel old too now. I was born late 80s so had a 90s childhood but cant remember many trends...never been that "trendy" I guess. I do remember: Cabbage ...

Granted, but now they deliberately stomp on them O_O! I wish I could clone myself

At the risk of being pelted with rotten tomatoes, I kind of liked this. I mean, OK. It was kind of stupid in places (particularly the ending). And the narrator ...

Granted, but now you're a skeleton. I wish I had lots and lots of very good friends ^_^

Happy Birthday to us!

16 Oct '07: I've been doing some editing :D I love this story, but I want to polish it, so any crits are, as always, welcome. Johnny Appletree Round, ripe ...