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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Hiya again :) All the points you've made are completely right and I'll make sure to change that. (oh, and the info dump has been dumped since your comment :) ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Haha yep, hardcore editing session has just been initiated. :P I'll keep your comments in mind, again, thank you :)

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 2 part 1

    Hiya, thank you so much for the review :) I know at the moment it's not the most exciting thing in the world, trust me I'm literally thinking the same ...

    Sep 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    Ahhh, okay, I'll try to make that a bit more clear as well then :)

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    Thank you so much for the review, I completely understand where you're coming from on pretty much every point you have made, I'll try and swap some things around to ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    Awesome, I can completely see what you mean, and maybe flashbacks are the way forward, I shall have a think about it, I can actually think of a couple of ...

    Sep 16, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    hello again *waves* Thanks for reviewing this one too, I appreciate it :) Okay, so I can totally understand where you're coming from, I actually agree about the whole suspense ...

    Sep 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 1 part 2/2

    Okay so I completely understand what you mean about the beginning, I think it's one of those things that seems like a good idea at the time but now that ...

    Sep 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains - Chapter 1 part 2/2

    Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad that you were able to grasp what was going on, and seem to like it :). I completely understand what you ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Bridge of Chains- Part 1

    Cheers priceofwords :) The werewolf is the my evil guy of choice in this so far, so he should be popping up more, I was thinking of writing this so ...

    Aug 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Humor Re: New York

    Awesome, I'll watch out for it :)

    Aug 6, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Realistic Re: Xynophen

    Yeah, I liked your ending, it was a nice twist :)

    Aug 6, 2015


Why should Caesar just get to stomp around like a giant while the rest of us try not to get smushed under his big feet? Brutus is just as cute as Caesar, right? Brutus is just as smart as Caesar, people totally like Brutus just as much as they like Caesar, and when did it become okay for one person to be the boss of everybody because that's not what Rome is about! We should totally just stab Caesar!
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