by-my-rules

Well, I like the image, but it is really short, I think you could expand on this. The simplicity of it makes it very unique, I like your style in ...

umm, well, i agree that its a hard topic to tackle, buu well, u really need to work on it, the stanza structure was all over the place, there wasnt ...

DAMN MAN, i've never read any of your stuff before, but im gonna check it out after i write this. ok, so, like everyones been saying, the tence switch is ...

SWEET dude, thats massive man, i loved the rythm, i loved th vocab, i loved the expression, and i thought th way u broke it into stanzas was really well ...

hey dude, iv glanced at some of your stuff before, buu i can honestly say i really noticed this one,its simple, quiet, it makes sence, and its cute :D:D, which ...