c.tyler

Thanks for all the input. What are some good resources for learning about show vs tell? I've got 3 chapters written and somewhat edited. If anyone wants I can email ...

If the cops found her than maybe she would cast a spell or two and turn them into frogs. I think "than" should be "then".

I agree it is a good start, but it is a bit confusing about 6 paragraphs into it. In my opinion, character development should take time.