cali34rniasummer

--> fantastic! I agree that our age usually depends on our emotions (and the way we think, I guess). --> beautiful poem about a family. :] I really love this. ...

---> I love it Demoness, especially the very last line! That can encouragement to those who were feeling hopeless. :) Super!! - Cali34rniaSummer

--> know what you make a good *creep-me* poem though I cannot exactly connect the title "I Blush" to the content of the poem.. I like how she felt envious ...

----> on both are too shy, switch [to] to [too] ;) ----> This poem is good if not only for those typographical oopsies such as the way you spelled "maybe". ...

--> ooh, I get it. The message says that you and the ghost were one. I guess you need to widen or expand the idea. You can also add some ...

--> aaww! I think this is what love can really do, eh?? I'm soo in love with this :) good good poem! --->> yipes! *My impression. Very good. I really ...

---> For me, this one was well written! :) ---> The message was clear in this poetry, about losing a friend, a friend's betrayal. Keep up the good job and ...

--> I get the concept of the story :) and like it although, I think I missed something and now I wonder what's Mr. Silence, all about? I mean who ...