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  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: Those Left Behind

    I think it is a very beautiful poem. The rhyming does add to it, I must say. Obviously, the formatting can be a problem. Perhaps add an explanation of what ...

    Aug 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Mirror Girl

    Wow! I loved the poem. It was descriptive, yet sparse in unnecessary detail. Behind the glass, she faded fast and God would never know that mirror girl was held captive ...

    Sep 17, 2010


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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