canislupis

Hi! These remind me of summer, and gardening with my mom. Anyway, the problems I see are that a) you have too much clutter, and b) it's out of focus. ...

Right! Skins, part one of three is up. Sorry this is taking so long, guys. Occasional--Done! Thanks, I enjoyed that. Lindsey--Done as well! Liked that as well. All of you ...

Ah, no, I didn't mean remove odd associations. ^^; Those can be wonderful to read about, and I love making odd associations. However, once those odd associations are made and ...

I'm not sure I completely understand what you're asking, but here goes anyway. What needs to happen (from what I see) is that a) He needs a reason to go ...

Claire He's back now, crashing through the burned bushes louder than the bear, which is still lying next to us in the dark. I do not like the way the ...

Depends on the subject and person. For example, I learn through reading words, or watching movies. Diagrams, people talking, or 'hands on" things just don't work for me. On the ...

Claire "Wait a second..." I hold up a hand, stopping Skye and waiting for my brain to catch up. She was ready to take this kid with us. But I ...

( i might be wrong, but i think the guy from 2 is already dead...) Umm.... yes. Definitely. I wanted him killed early on so I wouldn't have to write ...

Hi Azila! I don't actually have time for a review right now, but before I go, here are a few of my first thoughts upon reading this: 1. Gender and ...

Conratulations, Tanya!

Hi again! I don't think it's a problem, and I wouldn't shift to the woman's POV--I like how.... removed, and cold, she seems. I think getting inside her head might ...

Hi Azila! Thank you so much--now you've given me three reviews. >.< I feel bad now. Anyway, again, I agree--and I did try to keep everything the same while cutting ...

Claire My hands are shaking. It's because I'm scared. No. It isn't. My entire body is shaking. "Skye," I choke out, stumbling. My eyes waver in and out of focus. ...

Hello! Sorry this took so long. Now, I think Wolf covered the nitpicks already, so I'm not going to go here. I like this story--the idea of a resistence movement ...