captain.classy

I turned around and stared into the bright blue eyes of Ryan Wilkins. The hottest guy at our High School. I think this should all be one sentence: "I turned ...

This is your backyard! My backyard is about two feet wide. I guess that is what I get for living in the city! I think its beautiful. I like the ...

I wrote a story of a pig who could fly. I think red bull stole it from me.

(and i'm a BOY), HA! I guess I feel so negative about the movie because the story means so much to me. It has a huge value in the family. ...

Diary Queen all the way! It's such a treat for me because we don't have it where I live. (I would have picked Sonic, but you don't have it. Boo!) ...

Dialogue because I'm not so good at anything else! HA Plus, I really like to listen when people talk, and I feel as thought I have a grasp on how ...

I'm very into equal rights and am strongly against discrimination and prejudice of any kind, but I consider myself politically ambiguous, since I know politicians have to appeal to the ...

Wow! Is the first thing that came to mind. Your descriptions made my bones tingle as if the story were real. I liked it, and even thought it is bordering ...

Alright, I didn't find anything to correct, and that made me mad! So Anyways, is this the entire story? I know it is short, but it didn't really seem to ...

That was my favorite movie as a kid! I haven't seen it in a really long time, but I still have it on VHS in my garage!

I really liked it! It was so much better than the last section, I was very happy! ~Classy

So your poem is very short, but I am about to make it even shorter. Your lines do not flow well with so many breaks. I also suggest writing more ...

Okay, well just to be brief, I was bored when reading this! I suggest you run through it and add more symbolic imagery, and maybe change the title. It's not ...

I liked your poem, but there are some words you used that seem off and don't flow. "Whilst" where you have it makes the whole line seem like a blast ...

Actually, the Myans predicted many things in history, such as the Twin Towers falling and the American depression.