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Hey Benny Boop! So, one bad thing I have to say is that... well this isn't necessarily boring, it's just a bit slow. Do you see how three paragraphs down ...

The top ten cities always confuse me. haha

Apple! Wanna review this for me! (:

Pwetty please? (:

For Rosey's Beginnings of Magic contest. It may seem long, but it reads fast. At least for me. (: When I awoke, the sun was just rising over the tall ...

For being the Pirate King...

Hey, will you do: that one?

Hey! Will you do this one?

Elinor! This chapter is lovely! Far better than your first. Anywho, I don't have any criticism. I think the characters in this are perfect. However, I think you should mention ...

Hey El! Here to comment on the new part and then I'll move on to chapter two. “Listen,” he says, “I don’t mean to scare you, but there’s been a ...

Hey! Finally, I'm here. So, this chapter is a lot to take in. I'm not fan of piling descriptions of characters all in one spot, and frankly, it could get ...

Done!

Hey there! So what I see here is Martin Luther King Junior. Maybe that's just because we just watched a movie on him... haha. When I'm not trying to look ...

Mkay, I have two things to point out. The statue is the finger to the gods... why? Can you explain this to me? It sounds poetic and beautiful, but what ...

For being my best friend!