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I think this excerpt creates a strong atmosphere of suspense and dread, particularly through the narrator’s helplessness as Colin unknowingly approaches the creature. I was immediately drawn into th

LOVE THIS. i like the way you use mud as a way to talk about how "dirty" the world is or how its become something corrupt. something were scared to ...

so random! love it! i really liked the way i tried to find a way to relate to what you're saying. it honestly has kind of a spooky vibe (happy ...

beautiful piece! i really enjoyed the way you used imagery to really focus in on how the dust settles or how wings look or what the author is feeling. really ...