carolinewashere

I really liked this poem a lot but I am not completely sure what is going on. Maybe that is the point. My favorite lines are "To falling Beats of ...

Most poems usually have some type of scheme. This doesn't seem to have one, or I could not find it. Its really not a bad thing, I hardly ever have ...

I think this poem is great. A sentinel of sorts, head bowed to the darkness, that was my favorite line. I am a little confused what the sentinel is doing ...

I enjoyed reading this. I like the message you are trying to send, or at least the message I interpreted from the poem. I think that it could flow better, ...

I think is poem is good but it could be SO Much better. I feel that I understand your poem but you could have used different, more descriptive words that ...

I like what you are writing about. I enjoy thinking about things like too. But the flow of the poem is not to hot. Its really repetitive during some parts ...

I really enjoyed the poem. Your use of vocabulary is quite amazing. I agree with Anna. I did not think that the word Tarnish flowed well. When I was reading ...

It was a good poem! the only thing that bothered me was this line: "you never left when i am down" maybe you mean you never left when i was ...

I think its a very cute poem. I'm not entirely sure whats going on, maybe if it was longer you would be able to explain better. my favorite part was: ...

This is really good, I like it a lot. The rhymes don't sound forced, which is good. But I was wondering what happened to them? Why do they disappear in ...

I really liked this poem. I thought it was interesting and it soothed my mind in a way. Im not totally sure if I understand it, but i like it. ...

This is a nice poem. Some rhymes felt effort less like the one in the 3rd stanza. But most of the other rhymes felt forced. I wasn't really sure what ...

I think it is a very cute poem! I totally get the story. And i know at the beginning you analogized about not having any imagery. I disagree with you ...

It was a good poem. But I didn't really connect with your character. And in the 10th like where it says "I see a something." Do you mean to have ...

I thought it was good. Your great at descriptions which is great because if you cant describe something then you have nothing. But what kept bothering me was when i ...