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  • Poetry » General, General Re: No Love Story for the Loner

    Review :D This is a great poem. It had great rhyme. It really made the reader connect to the character. Great work, keep it up! Now for some additional things ...

    Aug 22, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Broken Beyond Repair: Prologue

    Review :D This prologue is an interesting start to this story. You can really get a grasp on what the character is feeling. I noticed that there was great detail, ...

    Aug 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Sadness And Sorrow

    Review :D Hello, I want to start of by saying this poem is very true. It might just be me because I like realistic stories, but I think it makes ...

    Aug 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Walk Past the Graveyard

    Review :D I think this is a beautiful piece of literature. It is something that I can read multiple times, and it still have meaning. I think that this deserves ...

    Aug 14, 2014
  • Lyrics » Humor, Lyrical Re: She's An Extra Terrestrial!

    Review, :D this song was fantastic and well written. I could feel the what the character was going through. My favorite part of this poem was this line: She's an ...

    Aug 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Chasing Clouds

    review, I loved this poem because it was beautiful and written well. I wanted to mention that I love the title of the poem, it captures the readers attention. I ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: Here in the Dark

    Review :) Positives 1. I loved the idea of the poem. 2. It has some good descriptions. 3. The poem had a great flow. Negatives 1. words were repeated a ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I remember that one time...

    review :D for starters this is a great poem, the detail is good Positives this poem captures the readers attention, it's dark. when I first started reading this I thought ...

    Jun 30, 2014


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