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Re: Here in the Dark
instead of using it isn't safe to play twice near the end of the poem, try to find another word. It will capture the readers attention more. Besides that It ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Coffee
Review :D Positives 1.This poem has great description has great imagery 3.You can capture the feeling of the character Negatives The poem could be a little bit longer Overall The ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Same Pain
thanks for the review :D
Jul 2, 2014