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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: As The World Falls

    Wow!Love this poem. It flows really well and I think this reflects how we think the world is will be OK. The contrast between good and bad such a the ...

    Feb 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Health Re: Frozen in Time

    I really like this poem! It has a nostalgic tone and I can relate to this special moment. You keep it quite light hearted but with a touch raw emotion ...

    Nov 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Dyslexia

    Really liked this poem! I liked the rhyming of the second and fourth line and the fact that it wasn't in every verse. In the verses that had no rhyming ...

    Jun 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Sight

    So, I love this poem! I like the fact that the first and second stanza reflect your problems and flaws but with your special someone fixing you and then the ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Way

    Really enjoyable to read. It flows really well. I loved that I could find multiple meanings in the poem. I also adored the inspirational touch that was laced with advice. ...

    May 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freedom vs safety

    Written quite well! Really like this outlook on life. I do think you should tone back the punctuation (the commas and full stops) if you want a better flow. If ...

    May 16, 2014


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
— Unknown