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This poem is pretty sad to me. You chose words like "roadkill," "hastily," and "dead," and what can I say? I have the chills just thinking about this. And I ...

I thought this story had full potential. I believe that this is a draft because I found many mistakes that you would have to fix. My dream was dull with ...

I loved this story because of the build up. The more you used the tick tocks, the more my heart raced to find out what happened next. This is a ...

This poem just described everything I felt when I was with my exboyfriend. I feel that way with a certain crush I have now. I mean we all have those ...

The poem completely matches the title of the poem, especially when you put the title in a different language. I just love how you describe what being in this void ...

"Jenna," Lizzy said, closing her notes and getting up. At her words, Lizzy thew a glance... "No idea," Lizzy mouthed back. ...the door, and just as she reached the threshold, ...

"12" is twelve Father refused to take the gun, and Uncle grew angry. The blood rushed from Father's face, and he hastily lifted two pistols. "24" is twenty-four. "1" is ...

Once my eyes have adjusted to the bright rays, I notice that the sun is coming... Lying next to me, I notice a young girl a bit older than me, ...

Life at Eighteen: I wish that this poem could be in stanza format instead of this paragraph. I feel as if the pauses are not meant for paragraphs but separate ...

she lays on the ground "Help me," she says "Please," she pleads I only found those few errors. Poetry doesn't usually have grammar errors, but this made me want to ...

This looks like a good piece. What I highly recommend more than anything is to make more paragraphs. If you keep a piece this long at one paragraph, people are ...

school campus with her mom at her side and a big, chocolate brown dog next... that said, 'Service Dog. Do Not Pet." me a question, and instead, I waved him ...

This story was very entertaining. I enjoyed the little laugh. I just thought that sometimes Beety spoke too maturely when it came to telling a story to little kids. I'll ...

I am a video gamer myself, and I understood every reference to this poem completely. As a gamer, I loved how you put the gaming elements into something universal such ...

This is a very thought out, short essay you have here. If you had to do this for a class assignment, I hope you did a very good job on ...