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Re: Let's Say
Let's say there's a girl (I love the short syntax...really catches the reader's attention). You know what (I would change it to "the kind")/color] I'm talking about: bright eyes, soft ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Becoming a Star - prologue
Hey Ofir!! I loved it!! When you say "pulling the strings" what do you mean by that? Is it a stage manager or director? I like it by itself, but ...
Dec 25, 2010 -
Re: Letters
"I sat in the old rusty thing and thought about how much you wanted to get a driver's license. Too bad you couldn't wait just a bit longer, you idiot." ...
Sep 3, 2010